Tuesday, April 22, 2008

♥Ana Karen Montiel Marquez.♥ ==Lying==



We all have feelings
we all make mistakes
We all lie
But...
the truth is that
you broke my heart.

6 comments:

Julia T. said...

pues no le entiendo ♥

Julia T. said...

kien no le entiende ami poema eee?
haha ntk

Julia T. said...

wow. de quien estavas pesando?
Aaliyah

Julia T. said...

wow!
ke bonito
poema
de quien estabas pensando
eehh??
-francisca-

Julia T. said...

A,

I like the ping pong of the the poem...and the pause at the end is perfect....
Check how you naturally played off each word...good/bad good/bad...and then the true feelings!

Great stuff with just a few words!

Julia T. said...

thANK YOU MR.SMITH AND FRAMCISCA AND ISIS AND AALYAH FOR POSTING A COMMENT =]
-ANA MONTIEL